SKETCHES APPROVED. Odette + Wanjiru + Liesl, on a call, 50 min. sent them 6/11,…

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SKETCHES APPROVED. Odette + Wanjiru + Liesl, on a call, 50 min. sent them 6/11, a day early. changes (one round, this is it): - 10-11, the four panels: keep. Wanjiru thought too clever, Liesl wants them - 14-15: heron and Morfar should be closer to the same size on the page. cheat the perspective - 16-17: the ice sounds. they're cutting the words to three. more dark, less text - 20-21: the heron taking off is too centered, move him right so the page turn pulls - 26-27: lit window, no figure. agreed - p32: Liesl wants her father's actual handwriting for "1961", scanned, not redrawn. yes - cover: they want 14-15 as the jacket image, redrawn vertical-ish to fit. case = the notebook text change: one line on p22 moved to p23. that's the one round of text changes, locked now invoice the second payment (3,000) today. colour samples due 7/31: doing 12-13 and 20-21

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personas/young-renter/records/notes-2026.yaml:611

- id: note-sketch-feedback
  kind: note
  date: 2026-06-22 15:30
  body: |
    SKETCHES APPROVED. Odette + Wanjiru + Liesl, on a call, 50 min. sent them 6/11, a day early.
    changes (one round, this is it):
    - 10-11, the four panels: keep. Wanjiru thought too clever, Liesl wants them
    - 14-15: heron and Morfar should be closer to the same size on the page. cheat the perspective
    - 16-17: the ice sounds. they're cutting the words to three. more dark, less text
    - 20-21: the heron taking off is too centered, move him right so the page turn pulls
    - 26-27: lit window, no figure. agreed
    - p32: Liesl wants her father's actual handwriting for "1961", scanned, not redrawn. yes
    - cover: they want 14-15 as the jacket image, redrawn vertical-ish to fit. case = the notebook
    text change: one line on p22 moved to p23. that's the one round of text changes, locked now
    invoice the second payment (3,000) today. colour samples due 7/31: doing 12-13 and 20-21